It is sometimes arguing that children should be taught to become a real member of civilization. While a great number of people insist whether these are the permanent obligation of schools or parents, I think that both have their unique impact on children's nurturing.
To begin with, it is true that children are the main expressions of their parents. Since the child was born, the parents have received enormous duties, which enforce them to provide the child with any suitable condition for its overall development. Subsequently, the children's upbringing wholly depends on parents. Moreover, it is also important that parents do everything to help their children to integrate into society properly, without any suspects that children can neglect the imposed rules of the community. Youngsters, in fact, are more likely to be involved in the crime committed and abolish the family reputation in society because of the absence of parental monitoring in their lives. Thus, the adults need to preserve their children from unhealthy influence of some external powers in order to guarantee the safety of both children and modern community.
On the other hand, schools are also responsible for children's growth as a productive member of society. It may seem that the education is the prime goal that schools and other institutions pursue, but the reality is that they are able to provide schoolchildren and students with practical skills essential for being the part of our modern community. Sociology, for instance, is one of the compulsory subjects, which children need to investigate during their studies at school or even college. The main principle of this subject is to clarify the abstract meanings of some elements and rules of society. It is also present the way in which our society was evolved and even how the values and customs of our ancestors were changed during decades. Nevertheless, the sociology has to become an indispensable aspect of the educational system.
To conclude, Although the parents and schools have different roles to play on children's lives, I hope that they will be no less pivotal in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evertheless, the sociology has to become an indispensable aspect of the education...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, i think, in fact, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17052023121 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77822645164 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557803468208 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7532546884 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.266666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0666666667 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228542828192 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733358643295 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415892160762 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139622843379 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323663481652 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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