Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that those who pursue and maintain a particular career choice early in life are more likely to experience greater fulfilment in regard to their work than those who tend to switch jobs more frequent. In my view, career satisfaction is not determined by when someone starts a career path or how long someone does it. This essay will discuss some important factors believed to be involved.
On the one hand, deciding a career and pursuing it for a long time can be beneficial. In fact, being able to choose a job early helps one not only envision his or her goal more vividly but also enable early preparation, such as accumulating relevant experience and enhancing soft skill. With this, chances are they get a salary better and eventually allow people to advance to the top of their chosen professions. This, consequently, result in better career satisfaction.
On the other hand, those who change jobs or career paths more regularly may also gain many benefits. First, young adults seem not to have a clear understanding of what they are really interested in due to a lack of real-world experience. Therefore, experiencing different jobs is likely to help them figure out what they have passion for and whether it is compatible with their work style and personality or not. Second, people exploring the various field of work are able to cope with many challenges in the workplace and daily life. This could be explained by the fact that changing jobs frequently give them chances to acquire a range of essential skill. Thereby making them more dynamic and flexible in their responses to the world.
In conclusion, although choosing and staying in one career path is satisfying to some people, people experiencing different kind of jobs can sometimes gain a higher level of career satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in my view, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95409836066 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74932451209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7798950119 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.928571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321571373611 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948363725053 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847921118926 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192811251121 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452570520646 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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