Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People said that those who pursue and continue with a particular career choice early in life are more likely to experience greater fulfilment in regard to their work than those who tend to switch jobs more regularly. In my view, career satisfaction is not determined by someone starts soon a career path or how long someone woos it. This essay will discuss some important factors believed to be involved.
On the one hand, deciding a career and pursuing it for a long time can be beneficial. In fact, being able to choose a job early helps one not only envision his or her goal more vividly but also enable early preparation, such as accumulating relevant experience and enhancing soft skill. With this, chances are they get a salary better and allow people to advance to the top of their chosen professions which may also possibly lead to career satisfaction.
On the other hand, those who change jobs or career paths more regularly may also gain many benefits. First, young adults seem not to have a clear understanding of what they are really interested in due to a lack of real-world experience. Therefore, experiencing different jobs is likely to help them figure out what they have passion for and whether it is compatible with their work style and personality or not. Second, people exploring the various field of work are able to cope with many challenges in the workplace and daily life. This could be explained by the fact that changing jobs frequently give them chances to acquire a range of essential skill.
In conclusion, although choosing and staying in one career path is satisfying to some people, people experiencing different kinds of job can sometimes gain a higher level of career satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...choosing and staying in one career path is satisfying to some people, people experiencing dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my view, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90753424658 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7108300654 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5084699076 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328702016427 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107246079344 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0902026068683 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199225873274 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503989031608 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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