Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In any type of sports for being successful, strength plays a vital role for any player to play a fantastic game. Some believe that physical strength is the most important aspect for success while others believe that mental strength is more important. I partially agree with above statement that physical strength is more important than mental strength. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and argue as to why physical strength is more important than mental strength.
To begin with, there are several reasons why physical strength is a major aspect to succeed in sports. Firstly, physical strength gives a player the power to be in the game and showcase techniques. There is not much that a player can achieve by being mentally fit, because to win a game players have to run, jump, attack and defend. All these activities performed by the body, and without a strong body they cannot continue playing. Secondly, the reason why a player should be physically fit, it builds self-confidence and positivity in a player to perform well and one can make an impression on others. On the other side if the person is not fit and gain unnecessary weight, then he might not be the right choice of the selectors because of his physical appearance. For example, in a football match, players should be physically fit throughout the match because they have to spend 90 minutes on the field with the ball. To perform that extend they need tremendous physical power so that they can play a long stretch. So until and unless players are not physically prepared, they cannot give their best. That is the reason physical strength is most important aspect to succeed in athletics.
However, being mentally fit is also important for any sport player’s success because they should be able focus on their game and never loss their sight from the goal. Furthermore, it will only happen when players are mentally fit. For example, in badminton match if a player keep running behind from another player it can cause of mental stress, and if he is not mentally able to prepare himself to come back on the game, one can loss the match even before they finish.
In conclusion, although being medically fit is important, but it is not enough to succeed in sports as they need a vast physical strength to achieve their set of goals. It is clear with above discussion that for being a successful player, one needs both abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72681704261 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47711525771 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481203007519 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.492083158 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.941176471 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4705882353 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244874990222 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105130103991 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10947836849 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179930146008 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1483377304 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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