Discipline has emerged as a major issue in many schools nowadays. Some people argue that parents should be responsible for ensuring a sense of discipline in their children whereas others think teachers play a main role in this. I believe both these parties need to be equally involved in disciplinary growth of children to ensure best results.
On one hand, children learn to obey their parents from early years of their lives. Since they are largely dependent on their parents for survival, naturally they are conditioned to follow them. So, parents can manipulate this conditioning to inculcate necessary habits in their kids. For instance, if kids are taught that they will get breakfast only if they wake up early in the morning, they will develop the routine of early rising. Moreover, it is easier to develop personality of children in a younger age because they adapt quickly and learn new things without questioning.
On the other hand, world is become excessively fast-paced and parents often have long work hours. Resultantly, children spend most of their time with teachers even in their younger years. This makes teachers important stakeholders in the personality development. In US, for instance, kids spend at least 12 hours per day in school. So, it is safe to say that tutors can significantly influence children into developing characteristics necessary for being a productive participant of the society. Furthermore, children consider their teachers as their role models and try to follow them religiously. This fact alone is enough to prove that teachers play a vital role in creating discipline in children.
To conclude, both parents and teachers have their own places in the lives of youngsters. Therefore, undoubtedly, both of them need to play crucial role to coach children into becoming civilized citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, at least, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22372881356 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85336352824 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3620597338 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6470588235 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359548633023 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111916227876 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980978054955 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215043523475 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440315715987 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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