Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics: Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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One of the most popular trends in an ever-changing world appears to be toward sport games’ discussing. This trends, as it grows, has attracted attention, in view of the fact that citizens more and more concentrate the sport’s meaning. However, I reckon that it plays a vital role in the society.
Some educationalists argue that the basketball, football or the badminton are considered to be an entertaining activities, with our work or study’s pressure is getting huger. For instance, if person want to ease their pressures, doing some exercise is the first choice for them. Therefore, in this view, what the most important function of the sport is that it has a positive impact on personal state of mind, and it is true that the people are willing to do that when they are available.
Another explanation is that the sport game has a beneficial effect on society, prompting the advancement of society through the sportsmanship. The people who are not challenged at a high level do not consider what learn is practical, because the spirit of the competition of sport is quiet. For example, since someone was recruited by a tennis team, learning how to play the table tennis, mastering a skill of cooperating to others, which these are both significant in the society. It will enables people to address some questions whether in the school or company. Furthermore, these abilities are of necessity in the society.
So, this is particularly important to do some sports games. There is a link between the human and society, and due to the fact that the sport will benefit you intrinsically, moreover this spirit will make a big different in the society.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
...on are considered to be an entertaining activities, with our work or study's pressure...
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Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'enable'
Suggestion: enable
...oth significant in the society. It will enables people to address some questions whethe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i reckon, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97794614883 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3632955481 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.076923077 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249439331609 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803808992607 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265587538716 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140175926813 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263241300286 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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