People have different views about how we can make our roads safer than thing we have. Some of them think that strict punishment could be useful while others believe that there are several ways expect “punishment” that promotes roads and driving. In my opinion both of them are good and necessary.
On the one hand, strict punishment depends on offences can help to promote roads safety. Punishment such as fine, licenses suspension, repeat driving courses for people driving dangerously, even sentence prison. All of them can to aware people who committed an offence that their bad driving has a negative consequence. Maybe do not repeat their fault.
On the other hand, safe driving need cultural works. There are several ways expect punishment. First, we should teach how can be a good driver? Why we should respect the rules? Second, we should define a good driver as a good citizen. By this, people respect to rules even when no police in roads and when the traffic light is broken. Third, in the movies, all drivers should obey the rules. For instance, keeping belt when they are driving, driving carefully without drinks or mobiles on hand. It cause the audience copy these movement and doing it such as daily activity. When a young man’s favorite actor is driving while he smoking and call to others, He think it can cause he or she seems unique then driving fast with a lot of offences.
In conclusion, although strict punishment is need in order to stopping driving offences, we should do other ways as alternatives.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...y without drinks or mobiles on hand. It cause the audience copy these movement and do...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'these movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; these movements
...les on hand. It cause the audience copy these movement and doing it such as daily activity. Wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smokes'.
Suggestion: smokes
...an’s favorite actor is driving while he smoking and call to others, He think it can cau...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 660, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...while he smoking and call to others, He think it can cause he or she seems unique the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, third, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91187739464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48193070724 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.152119187 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230750645987 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651644913797 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623524561818 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152255317589 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487248262939 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...y without drinks or mobiles on hand. It cause the audience copy these movement and do...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this movement' or 'these movements'?
Suggestion: this movement; these movements
...les on hand. It cause the audience copy these movement and doing it such as daily activity. Wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 629, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'smokes'.
Suggestion: smokes
...an’s favorite actor is driving while he smoking and call to others, He think it can cau...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 660, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...while he smoking and call to others, He think it can cause he or she seems unique the...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, then, third, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91187739464 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48193070724 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.152119187 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230750645987 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651644913797 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623524561818 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152255317589 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487248262939 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.