Some people think that student should concentrate on all subjects at school other believe that the teenagers should focus on the subject they are best at or they are most interested in ? To what extent do you agree with this view?
Education is an essential part of our life where student should have right to select the subjects as per their liking. Society believe that academics should only be concentration of children, while others believe to give permission to select and follow what they like. I sincerely accord with the later view and will be articulated in the subsequent paragraph.
To commence, significance of school-education should be disseminated among children as well as parents in order to make them cognizant regarding this. To explicate, despite knowing at what they are passionate about, imposing to learn only academic subjects on them would be a wrong-doing with them. Giving an authority to imitate their dreams one could achieve their goal at the right age if he could allow to do so since their childhood. To exemplify, in this cutting-age era where all the schools have extra curricular activity which can assist pupils to enrich themselves in their liking field.
On the contrary, it is irrefutable that academic records are equally imperative in student’s life it not only provide them basic teaching about life but also cultivate behavior of gratitude toward it. Nonetheless, all students cannot top studies and if they could do so these would not be a situation. Still some families exist whose belief deteriorate pupils life by not giving them freedom of their life.
In conclusion, Although education empowers them to compete with the world, it cannot assist everyone to master in it. Therefore, permitting them to follow their ambition in distinct field would be most satisfying option for parents as well children.
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Suggestion: believes
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Suggestion: doing
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Suggestion: Still,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22900763359 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82702583184 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3895058746 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223754011845 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800197129934 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624341595606 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129802574749 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794242886223 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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