Some people think that the world should have one government rather than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is thought that a one-world government would be better than a world with national governments. While this view is advantageous in a few aspects, the disavantages are more significant.
On the one hand, there are some merits of a world federal government. Firstly, global problems would be coped with more efficiently if there was one government in the world. Cooperation has worked throughout history because large collections of people have been able to use resources more effectively and provide greater prosperity and protection than smaller groups. Additionally, this policy can facilitate cross-national travelling as tourists may not have to acquire cubersome travel documents. Travel documents are known to cost a great deal of money and be time-consuming, so if such a matter is rised to the occasion, it will be money-saving and time-saving for a lot of individuals.
On the other hand, global homogenization is associated with some drawbacks, far outweighing the merits. This is not to say that cooperation is easy as countries in the world are differentiated by culture, ethnicity and language. This results in people’s difficulty in confederating and communicating with each other, which are the basic aspects of a homogeneous community. Moreover, it will be very difficult for one government to adequately address the needs of every single person worldwide, so invariably certain groups will be marginalized. Nowadays, there are approximately more than seven billion people around the world in total. And a government cannot give in to such a great deal of demands.
All things considered, that the world turns into one giant and has only one government is associated with many disadvantages which overshadow the advantageous. For this reason, it is not recommended that such a policy be adopted.
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Suggestion:
...people’s difficulty in confederating and communicating with each other, which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37062937063 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32387854992 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1060037947 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292775202099 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964182409708 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774172280707 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192992052416 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036872922284 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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