Some people think that young people should choose their professions themselves. Others believe that their parents should choose for them.
Discuss both these views and give your own option.
Today, there is more freedom and options when choosing a job in most countries compared to the past. Some believe that people should choose their professions on their own whereas others believe that their parents should decide it.
I really think children’s wills must be respected first of all even if the decision is against that of their parents.
In some societies, parents choose a job for their child or pass down their job to their child as a social custom. It allows children to easily trust and rely on their new workplace and perhaps co-workers, too, for parents’ insurance. Working for the place their parents choose means, in most cases, working in or near their local community. This kind of social custom keeps the population of community from flowing out.
However, parents’ choice of professions for their child is only acceptable when their offspring agree with it. If they are forced to follow parents despite their favor, parents just ignore their right to choose their occupation. The situation surrounding jobs is always changing; some jobs disappear while new ones appear. Some become unstable whereas others get more popularity. The gap between parents’ working period and their offspring’s are getting bigger in the current globalism. Therefore, the youth had better consider what profession to choose by themselves before following their parents.
Even though taking over parents’ professions or working for the place parents choose have been seen as a custom in some societies for a long time, it sometimes ignore children’s favor. In this period of change, when the accelerating globalism and technology development are seen, it is necessary for young people to decide their job by themselves with foresight and willingness. We have to respect them at first.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 91, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
...or working for the place parents choose have been seen as a custom in some societies...
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Line 15, column 166, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ignores'?
Suggestion: ignores
...societies for a long time, it sometimes ignore children's favor. In this period o...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, really, so, therefore, whereas, while, kind of, first of all, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37024221453 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85228168834 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560553633218 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4793755491 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418050062858 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141673465695 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129398320969 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254174798603 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138494604866 0.056905535591 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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