Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion
Choosing future occupation and a place to work at is a choice every person faces in their life. Two different approaches to working life will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, working for one organization seems to be quite a reasonable choice. First of all, it allows building a career and growing from the lowest level to the top one. For example, young diplomats might become ambassadors or official representatives of their countries in international organizations if they work for the MFA for ten or twenty years. Furthermore, being employed at one company might give a person a strong feeling of stability and security, which is quite important in the modern world, as every sphere of life is constantly undergoing changes. Finally, solid work experience and high levels of expertise are what can be achieved by devoting oneself to one institution.
Conversely, obtaining experience from different institutions can also be advantageous. Firstly, changing jobs, as well as any change, is what pushes people to go out of their comfort zone, develop new skills, and thus, learn to adapt to new circumstances. Moreover, working for several institutions gives opportunities to get acquainted with new people and improve one’s networking. Apart from that nowadays there are possibilities to work abroad, which is undoubtedly more challenging and broadens one's horizons. For instance, most professional researches prefer to sign short contracts with different research institutions or universities, because they aim to gather as much varied experience as possible.
To sum up, I believe that it is more beneficial to change workplaces as it makes one constantly learn and develop, it is an effective way of building new connections and also obtain international experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...doubtedly more challenging and broadens ones horizons. For instance, most profession...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3865248227 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19278145633 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9559709309 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275309007565 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101876215842 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787487259212 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157347496331 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954365580136 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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