In some schools, students must study music and learn to play a musical instrument. In other schools, studying music may not be required or there may be no music classes at all. Do you think all students should have to study music? Support your opinion with reasons and examples.
Nowadays, students in many schools have to study a lot of subjects, such as maths, physical, geography, history, chemistry, music…While students in some schools are taught music and play a musical instrument as a main subject, schoolchildren in other schools do not need to learn music. In my opinion, music classes should be taught at school. The below essay will support my idea.
At the beginning, music is one of the subjects which help students relax their minds after hard studying hours. You know the studying program at schools from primary to high schools is heavy pressure. It means children must learn many subjects in the same time, and they do not have rest time between those subjects. If musical classes are organized, students will learn effectively the else subjects.
In addition, musical classes can make an opportunity for detecting musical talents at school. This contributes partly to develop the art of nation. For example, many historical stories in the world recorded the famous musicians who educated from normal schools before. If there had not been musical classes at school, the world would not have had any famous musicians and singers.
Therefore, music should be encouraged in schools. Because it is not only an entertaining subject but also help us find our national talents.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14953271028 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65747790912 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.429919311 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7692307692 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4615384615 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.518184172315 0.244688304435 212% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175583002488 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144922674418 0.0667982634062 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301624902092 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151876003865 0.056905535591 267% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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