Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?
Going to a different country for high school or college has been a favored choice by many parents nowadays. While various benefits can be observed, other people also believe this would bring significant harm as well. This essay will discuss both views.
Supporters argue that allowing pupils to study overseas has several advantages. The first is good education students can acquire in another country different from their native one. This can be especially true to parents who are born and raised in developing countries such as Vietnam who want to get an advanced learning system for their children. Another bonus going abroad to study at high school and university level can have is personality development due to time spent apart from their families. Traits such as independence, responsibility, and tolerance towards different people and cultures could be easily reinforced. Consequently, students spending their high school or university years overseas can become more accomplished individuals for the opportunities in receiving better education and characteristics to succeed as a grown-up.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of this might be numerous. Foreign schools can provide better courses but there is an increasing number of internationally private high schools and colleges that open facilities in Vietnam. Besides, lots of solutions for training children's life skills can be thought of. Common examples are setting a spending limit for hobbies and pleasure and encouraging teenagers and young adults to take on part-time jobs which they're interested in. A significant downside of studying abroad is the intense financial burden on families. It can cost a fortune for parents who support their kids in this journey especially if their destination countries are US or UK. Furthermore, it could make a detrimental impact on students' psychological and emotional health.
In conclusion, the disadvantages are shown to be vast.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: they're
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02007174308 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4697691663 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226371779272 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681299515399 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608199775541 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123322516146 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064648688101 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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