Studies suggested that nowadays children watch more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons? And what measures should be taken to encourage children to spend more time on active or creative things?
With the advance of technology and media, children usually spend an excessive amount of time to watch TV and do not engage much in active or creative activities. Personally, there are a number of driving reasons behind this trend and appropriate measures need to be taken to solve such a problem.
To begin with, there are two major reasons why children spend time to watch TV rather than do creative activities. Firstly, many kid’s channels are being broadcast all day with addictive contents and colorful animations that appeal children to watch whenever they want. Secondly, most parents are occupied with their work, so they usually have less time for their children like play games with them, especially out door games. Therefore, they often let their children to watch TV in free time like the way help them take care and decline stress of children.
With the above mentioned reasons, they are many ways to tackle this problem. The first solution is that parents should restrict the amount of time that children spend for watching TV to ensure that TV will help them to reduce stress. Parents also pay attention to the kind of channel because there are plenty of channels that are not suitable for children. Secondly, the Ministry of Education and Training should incorporate a lot of extracurricular activities like voluntary activities in school programs instead of focusing only on academic subjects. These activities not only help them broaden their horizon about life but also improve their skills like communication skill.
In conclusion, a large numerous of kid’s channel and lack of children care are the two reasons leading children tends to have a secondary lifestyle. Therefore, the mentioned solution should be taken to handle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13888888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58228772149 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6840713607 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.846153846 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303902240926 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111637628641 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696725939281 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194278384037 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521669841607 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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