There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people s health and well being

Essay topics:

There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being.

Automobiles are the major contribution in temperature hike among several other factors. Rising global temperatures and human health issues are often being caused by the use of vehicles.It is often argued that global warming and a decrease in life expectancy of people are caused by usage of automobiles. From my perspective, I completely agree that cars usage leads to the immense effect on the environment. Automobile usage results in decreases in public health and increases pollution.

Citizens by using cars extremely causes irreparable damage to the environment. Air pollution is the major problem of vehicular usage. A harmful gas named carbon dioxide evolves from the outlet of automobiles which leads to rise I temperature of planet .moreover, enormous utilization of transportation results in declining fossil fuels namely petrol, which leads to critical scenario for the future generation for finding fuels. Additionally, the smoke emitted from the carriers causes reduction of oxygen level in the atmosphere. For instances, in the metro Politian cities like Delhi the vehicular usage will be high this results in downfall of the oxygen percentage in the air.

Public health also effected by due to immense usage of the automobile. studies shown that as the increase in the number of vehicles causes the decreasing of life expectance of the citizens. Not only the people the animals also facing the dilemma due to heavy vehicular usage.
To conclude, that automobiles cause profound damage to the public and prosperity. People health and the environment are greatly disturbed extremely due to the vehicular usage.

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42125984252 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92824736818 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8378623027 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153447649878 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543994298162 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479597649013 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979851101746 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698476734276 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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