There has been an increase in ownership of vehicles over the years giving rise to traffic congestion and high level of pollution. To overcome these problem, people
should be persuaded to use public transport. What are the different ways people can be motivated to make use of public transport?
In upgraded technology, automobile vehicle improve their vehicle model which are very safe as well as reduce effort of human being. while considering safety people are more attracted towards new features. Even though it make human user friendly, there are several other drawback such as traffic, environmental pollution. These need to be take in to consideration for keeping environment neat and clean.
There are several ways to overcome this issue and motivated people to use public transport. One way is take road rally which include posters related environmental pollution level. The graph bar which shows increase in pollution level from years. It also include percentage of gases emits through vehicle and what are several diseases may encounter through these gases.
Secondly, public transport made available as per people requirement. Public transport made several offers for regular passengers such as offer on monthly, yearly passes. People are more attracted towards public transport.
Government start new theme to post different posters on road which shows comparision between travelling through public transport and by self vehicle. What are different possibilities to happen need to show. Many time people have time to look surrounding, read posters so that they change their mind towards public transport.
In conclusion, number of ways are available for reducing pollution and rush. It's upto human being whether they take issue seriously or not, because after all, they have to face issue whatever it is good or bad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...s well as reduce effort of human being. while considering safety people are more attr...
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Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s well as reduce effort of human being. while considering safety people are more attr...
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Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...ed towards new features. Even though it make human user friendly, there are several ...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'includes'?
Suggestion: includes
... in pollution level from years. It also include percentage of gases emits through vehic...
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Line 7, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...owards public transport. Government start new theme to post different posters on ...
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Line 9, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... face issue whatever it is good or bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, after all, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49579831933 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6491521668 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0944045308 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271272529057 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881598817821 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526123947864 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136492924983 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533302426299 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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