These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than following a healthy lifestyle.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Thanks to a free flow of information literally on everything, people now are more knowledgeableabout the ways to keep fit. At the same time, however, medicine is far more advanced than ever, thus making some people more reliant on doctors, rather than taking initiative to lead a healthier lifestyle.
There has never been a better time for those who take interest in keeping fit. A wide variety of applications for our devices are being created almost on a daily basis, and most of them can be downloaded free of charge. These apps can do virtually anything from tracking one’s heart rate to urging individuals to do a certain sets of push-ups. Even if you are technically challenged, the fitness facilities available today are so appealing that you sign up in a heartbeat. All it takes, then is a sheer commitment.
On the other hand, there are those who, due to various reasons, choose to let doctors worry about their health. For most of them, keeping a healthy diet or doing a regular physical exercise are not a top priority. The prevalence of fast food chains coupled with a hectic lifestyle, most people are unwilling to cook healthy meals at home, opting for a less time-consuming option even at the expense of far-reaching consequences of unhealthy eating. Others may simply be too lazy to be committed to a physically active life. Over-reliance on our cars and a sedentary life-style are making it even harder to lead a healthier way of life. Having said that, there are those whose health conditions do not allow being physically active, thus leaving them no choice but to be dependent on doctors and medicines.
Although medical science has come a long way, individuals should not take a healthy lifestyle for granted. At the end of the day, the prevention is better than cure.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88599348534 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8623008177 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.490162724 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146032380495 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428714409354 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273976560666 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801955231311 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191209548552 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.