Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
It's true that some people contend the popular consumer goods which have the right methods of marketing would sell more products. Personally, I agree with the view that advertising has a strong impact on the sale of the products, but I also argue that there's a range of factors have to influence this.
On the one hand, advertisements are definitely made used to sell commodities effectively. It's observed that advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they don't otherwise want. As a typical example, technology services have to bring their companies which manufactured them a huge amount of money thanks marketing. Lots of people seen queuing to buy the latest models although their devices don't need replacing. Generally, advertisements affect consumers' psychology that the new is always better than the one that was released before; furthermore, the newest high-status devices, which belong with being a connoisseur, lead people to make this decision.
On the other hand, some arguments tend to gravitate the opinion that advertisements are not only the reason for the high sale of trade goods. Firstly, consumers make the purchase of new commodities that have more improve features and can bring them more convenience and safety. For example, the new car which has improved safety features and is environmental friendliness is worthy to buy due to they bring us benefit. Secondly, some people are interested in staying updated with the new version, every they are a slave to new models. Thirdly, they believe that the products they own would reflect their social status, so they fund to keep up with the latest model.
To consume, although marketing is of paramount importance, other factors are also indispensable for the high sale of new trade goods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20138888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84717987773 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.739447223 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224079671921 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735208518749 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363892023309 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127926453156 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328200984393 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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