Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Food is essential for human survive. Nowadays, many nations buy their foods from various countries all over the globe. This may contains both some merits and demerits. This essay will discuss both of views and reach a conclusion at the end.
On the one hand, importing foods from other countries may decrease deforestation and supply more nutrition for people who cannot obtain some kinds of foods. Firstly, farmer cut down trees to open new farm lands for farming; as a result, deforestation appear as a problem. If some countries fetch foods from different places of the world where are suitable for farming, it will hinder the deforestation process for farming. Secondly, in some cities, which are unlucky for farming to grow some sort of crops, people could not afford enough nutritious foods unless their government obtain these fruits and vegetables from other countries. Hence, food merchandise is vital for many people to get enough vitamin and mineral, moreover to conserve their forests.
On the other hand, if a nation is reluctant or unable to raise crops for their citizens, eventually this leads to stagnation in the agricultural development and economical dependency as well. For example, in Sudan, which has big desert territories, farmers are not able to grow vegetables because of scorching sun and high temperatures. However, another country, Israel which has also some similar arid lands, they can grow many crops by using technology and sun energy to obtain water and using it in farming. Thus, people could grow their crops even in the deserts if they wants; consequently, they supply enough foods for their citizens and save their moneys.
In conclusion, in spite of increasing trend in the trades of food between various nations, this embody pros and cons. To my opinion, the advantages of buying crops from different nations outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20655737705 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65030815142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2780771631 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.866666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22146619023 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791045025658 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582619107339 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151899757573 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684750330316 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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