Topic: The number of people who choose to get married is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely suggested that people tend to stay single rather than opt to settle down in the future than it is now. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the number of people choosing to get married will fall more in the future than in recent days.
First of all, staying single is better. If you get married, it means that you may have the possibility to lose your freedom as well as not being able to do everything you want like the time you are single. This is the reason why people have a preference not to settle down but just go to date and go out nowadays. Getting married, you need to worry about anything which did, does and will happen to you and your families, you may not hang out with your friends or stay up late outside or meet anyone you want any more, just because you are married. It is true that everyone also does not have time for themselves owing to having to take care of their little families and look after their children. Therefore, people believe that choosing not to marry anyone will be a better choice for them.
Secondly, it can be seen that getting married has the same meaning as reducing your chance of promotion and any opportunities at the workplace. According to the New York Times, 57% of US citizens settling down promote slower than the others who don't have wives or husbands to care for. It is obvious that once you get married, you may have difficulties balancing your lives between work and family completely. If you spend time working hard, you will lose your family. If you attempt to take care of your family members too much, you lose your life chance at work. It is inevitable.
You can take lots of advantages of staying single. With the development of the world today in all aspects, it can be easily said that in the future, people will not choose to get married as their main purpose in life anymore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42397660819 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24031759963 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0890108409 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285832992618 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928217698868 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742209617571 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190952141195 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636120016763 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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