We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages.
Nowadays, Technology has become advanced and it is affecting the humans lives in a positive way. However, There are privacy issue, restriction on personal data and private content. I totally satisfied with this statement. In this essay we will consider the negative factor of advancement along with positive.
Firstly, The most common thing is rumour, In this world, fake newses spread rather than the real one. Secondly, scamming people by hacking, bullying. In other words, most of people are hacking id and steal their personal information. For instantiate, a person send their private photos with other, whom he really trusted on any social networking sites and then someone hack his id and he will spamming him and post his picture with false captions on it, troll him, It can cause depression moreover sometimes it become the reason for suicide.
On the other hand, Internet has a big contribution in today's educational system. Recent research demonstrated that children prefer studying online because vary material have been available, which clears all the doubts. It is global has become global connectivity system. For example, my friend is went to abroad for study propose, and we often meet online by video calling, all is possible of internet.
To concluded, we can clearly see that drawbacks defeated the benefits, thinking logically life is more important then of few moment of happiness. Nevertheless, there are some pros we can get via internet and we should keep in balance by not spending too much time on internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ed and it is affecting the humans lives in a positive way. However, There are privacy issue, rest...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...e by hacking, bullying. In other words, most of people are hacking id and steal their personal...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
... cause depression moreover sometimes it become the reason for suicide. On the othe...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ason for suicide. On the other hand, Internet has a big contribution in today...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enefits, thinking logically life is more important then of few moment of happines...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...nking logically life is more important then of few moment of happiness. Nevertheles...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun moment seems to be countable; consider using: 'few moments'.
Suggestion: few moments
...gically life is more important then of few moment of happiness. Nevertheless, there are s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.172 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67069728723 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.889133885 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130387921224 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394268893894 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324467914329 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762008511206 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307057970425 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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