As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that businesses should shoulder social resonsibility beside generating income. I somewhat agree with this view as businesses obtain a myriad of merits from the society, albeit not all problems associated with society should fall on these organizations.
Businesses are beneficial from a healthy society in two main dimensions. The first benefit is that a stable society paves the way for the growth of companies. It is thought that decent business environment safeguards firms from unexpected events that may jeopardise their operations. To illustrate, social evils reign supreme in Mexico in recent years, has led to the withdraw of foreign companies from the nation. Additionally, contribution of economic organizations to society also improves the performance of their workforce. Employees of companies are members of community, which means that when businesses sponsor for local ceremonies or voluntary campaigns, their staff or the staff's relatives are likely to receive such values. The occasions not only strengthen social solidarity but render working people happier. Thus, given their supports, companies themselves can maintain the structure of society and boost the productivity of their workers.
However, it is not to say that economic entities should hold accountable for all societal issues. This will distract them from their foremost role, optimizing the use of resources and creating more output for humanity. It is therefore important for businesses to decide which category of social challenges will be their main interest. While doing so will reduce the risk of wasting resources, society can earn more values.
In sum, I mostly concur with the perception that firms should be responsible for certain problems of society. This is because firms can reap benefits in forms of enhanced business atmosphere and productivity of working people, even though their intervention should restrict to a certain extent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.625 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90532487318 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5239112603 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116251354236 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383759058809 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266847553088 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720628376152 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160113621817 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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