As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
It seems clear that enterprises should be responsible for communities in the place where they are located besides earning profits. In my opinion, I strongly agree that they must have responsibilities to society while generating revenue.
On the one hand, the efforts of firms to maximize their profits may have some advantages for society as a whole. Firstly, amount of money from paying tax to government will increase if businesses earn more profits. As a result, there is a plenty of opportunities to renovate public facilities and improve public health due to a higher budget. Secondly, the development of finance draws extending of manufacture. In this regard, there is more chances for local labor market and that is an effective method to decline unemployment rate in local.
On the other hand, companies also have responsibilities to maintain and protect environment in area where they are located. The first reason is that their activities have an effect on surrounded habitat, especially manufacturing. For instance, factories emitting toxic waste as byproducts during manufacturing process must construct chemical waste disposing systems to handle them before discharging them into rivers or atmosphere. Another reason is that they need to spend a part of revenue on charity and social-purpose activites. For example, big companies like ADB and Apple have enhanced their reputation throughout philanthropic actions such as providing scholarships or giving charitable donations for homeless senior citizens.
To sum up, allthought It is clear that all businesses must focus on profits, I highly agree they should refect upon their responsibilities to society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are more chances'?
Suggestion: there are more chances
...tending of manufacture. In this regard, there is more chances for local labor market and that is an e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53307392996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16609121754 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653696498054 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7949700704 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.384615385 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159374871369 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528488484169 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503038021107 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964918936428 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024174618803 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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