When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
many people see a job only as a source of income therefore the main factor for them to choose their career in salary while I disagree with this idea because I believe that there are other factors that are equally important when we want to choose a job.
On the one hand, money is so important especially these days because without it we can not reach to our dreams, even we cannot meet our basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, bills, health care and education. so, a good job should cover these needs. if people chose their job based on enjoyment and other non-financial factors, they might suffer from many problems. Teaching in my country is one of those jobs that do not provide teachers with enough money to live comfortable and raise a family.
On the other hand, I believe that other considerations are as important as salary when we choose a job. Firstly, I think that workplace is extremely important. working under a bad condition is not reasonable even if its pay is great. Subsequent factor can be people who we work with. A friendly relationship between personnels and customers can make a good atmosphere in workplace that increase job Satisfaction. Finally, time can be a priority to choose a job. working on night shift is not suitable for health, especially for one who is a morning person.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I think it is not enough. so, other factors should be considered
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91085271318 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73087253525 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6055552677 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4666666667 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18033682092 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577374853047 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076355992914 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116886004849 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715319841066 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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