When designing a building the most important feature is intended use of the building rather than its outward apperance ?To what extant do you or disagree?

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When designing a building the most important feature is intended use of the building rather than its outward apperance ?To what extant do you or disagree?

Nowadays,technology is very fast.The most of time save and less expensive using on internet.The root can be citizens would like designing building using more than appears.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay throw some light on all aspect to see in the right perspective.

The causes of the issue of multiheads.The most predominant the human being would like the designing building todays.Hence, adoloscent have a dream.They can buy the design department/house / home and so on.Therefore,they doing a lots of hard in our life .But also,they can affords all things with families members.So, there are plethora juvenli selecting the designing building.

The possible and plausible remedies are varied.A vital one is the local population of both the towns. As well as,they have poverty people living in small house.They poor dozen have not education in their life.They could not buy design building.Then, they have leaving small home/toward appears.Last but not the least,education is very essential part in our life. Thus,education have change in our life .They have well education person.

All said and done,I reckon on one hand the rich person most of choosing designing building because they think that first impress in last impress and economic financial status is good buy them big designing department.Moreover,
they poor people doing the hardwork and education.They will achieve all things.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, i reckon, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37651879696 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.819172028 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.0 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3333333333 7.06120827912 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124632705027 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606906430493 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569315032091 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792374280723 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490757419857 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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