When visiting foreign countries, some people think that it is an advantage to learn their culture and tradition. How do you think people can learn other culture and tradition? Why do you think that some people are interested in learning those tradition and culture while other are not?
In our society nowadays, travelling aboard is becoming more and more prevalent in every aspect of human life. Some arguments consider whether learning foreigner tradition and culture by visiting their countries is beneficial or not? Personally, I totally agree with that point of view because of various reasons. In addition, the reasons are that people are curious about learning from foreigner are based on individual thinks.
Regarding studying other countries’ cultural and traditional lifestyle, I’m opinion of that it is essential and interesting for life of human. Initially, learning something helps people broaden their horizon significantly so new culture and tradition are not an eliminations. It is identified that citizens should travel aboard to entertain as well as studying because of being knowledgeable. Vietnamese farmers, for instance, invariably spend money having trip aboard, especially Thai Lan, to learn from them about agricultural methods which refine the farming of Viet Nam. To conclude, should people not learn the other tradition and culture, they will have steady knowledge.
As far as the second question is concerned, not only does studying tradition and culture fascinate people, but it is also annoying for some of them. Looking at the former, people are keen on travelling aboard and studying their cultural and traditional lifestyle because they are extremely extroverted. It is exemplified that their life aspiration is having journeys as many as possible and they have tendency on making foreigner friends because of the lifestyle of the other countries. Aside from the argument, some people do not have opportunity to travel outside their countries regardless of being affordable. An explanation could be that they have to be swamped with their jobs so they do not have much time for other pursuits.
In conclusion, although there are a variety of tremendous advantages on studying international culture and tradition, it still has some detrimental effects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an elimination' or simply 'eliminations'?
Suggestion: an elimination; eliminations
...ly so new culture and tradition are not an eliminations. It is identified that citizens should...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, regarding, second, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53896103896 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95581534006 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0676959431 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32350072883 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114506638894 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875323052961 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192157047439 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444233763924 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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