Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To achieve desire is one of the common goals for must of the individuals, but some of them grab it with their luck rather than hard work and deserving capacity. I disagree with the statement because achieving aims is only successful with their hard work, also it is just an annotation that we have heard from our seniors from childhood.
Though, To meet our target is successful if we can do the hard work when we dream it and want to make it successful than we start to make research, and get engaged in it. finally, when output is ready we may get afraid and tally gods to make it best. After all, we give credits to god rather than looking our own hardship, so people accept that the output depends on luck, but they are unaware of their contribution to the achievement. For example, a student is waiting for his finals, started to increase the study hours and attend the exam, till he gets his results he is afraid, thinks that if his result is good it is only by his luck. he forgets how hard he has prepared. So, luck is just an assumption that we create because of the fear, the goal is just an outcome of our hard work.
also, our parents and seniors teach us that our achievement depends on our horoscopes. they deflected our mind and way of thinking, also there are some religious believes that change our conceptions regarding achieving success. such belief makes people lazy, and inactive but such factor is affecting our way of achieving targets. Like, if some individual wants to buy a bike then he starts to pray god instead of saving.
In conclusion, luck is just an imaginary part of our life, we can't get our dream true unless we make hard work and change the conceptions about our society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: He
... result is good it is only by his luck. he forgets how hard he has prepared. So, l...
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...is just an outcome of our hard work. also, our parents and seniors teach us that ...
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Suggestion: They
... achievement depends on our horoscopes. they deflected our mind and way of thinking,...
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Suggestion: Such
...onceptions regarding achieving success. such belief makes people lazy, and inactive ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... just an imaginary part of our life, we cant get our dream true unless we make hard ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, after all, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50641025641 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4150167802 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7383152778 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0918627610442 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367083750183 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342195226782 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644583963338 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452565116456 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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