Why children rebel against their parents
The relationship between parents and their kids must be the strongest bond; however, it is not usually like that. Sometime children are rebellious against their parents because of some different reasons.
The first reason is the children’s changes during puberty period. Adolescence is an important stage to change between childhood and adulthood. In this period, apart from physical development, children also go through psychological, social and emotional changes. These tremendous changes make them become oversensitive. Therefore, they may feel irritated, angry, confused and lost. In addition, in this period teenagers not only have the need of assert their opinion strongly but also want to have decisions by themselves. Meanwhile, their parents are overprotective towards the kids and want to keep an eye for whatever their kids do. As a result, there are a lot of conflict between them.
Another cause is high expectation of parents about what their kids will be. Parents always have dreams of their children’s success. In particular, they want their kids to have good manners and get high grades at schools or achieve a qualification which the children do not like. Consequently, the kids trend to oppose against their parents. For example, when a kid want to become a teacher but their parents push them to take part in Medical University. Hence, the child rebel by not doing well at the university even not attending classes.
Finally, seeking for attention of their parents is a cause too. Indeed, currently most parents are busy with their career so they do not spend a lot of time on taking care of their children. This makes kids be lonely and vulnerable, thus they rebel against their parents to be looked after more.
In conclusion, there are some main causes of children’s rebellion against their parents including changes during adolescence, high expectation of parents about their children and drawing parents’ attention. From my perspective, parents should try to understand their children more, listening to their opinion, and spend more time for them to prevent from unwanted conflict.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...niversity even not attending classes Finally seeking for attention of their parents ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15727002967 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62003521459 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516320474777 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 337.0 20.2975951904 1660% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1738.0 106.682146367 1629% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 337.0 20.7667163134 1623% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 185.0 7.06120827912 2620% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457376627873 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.457376627873 0.084324248473 542% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317465438018 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954879961078 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 171.4 13.0946893788 1309% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -270.58 50.2224549098 -539% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 134.7 11.3001002004 1192% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.13 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.63 8.58950901804 275% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 58.0 9.78957915832 592% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 136.8 10.1190380762 1352% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 58.0 10.7795591182 538% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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