Women Emancipation

Essay topics:

Women Emancipation

Women’s Emancipation has always been challenging and a matter of debate supported by different national and international agencies. Today, women are realized to be competitive than men provided that in almost all the sectors of the economy there is their benediction. The issue has got critical response among the writers, social activists or national and international organizations.
Although women are shrewd, yet they are tacitly suppressed. We can hardly discern any sector without women. There are some societies where women are neglected when they commit to work. They assume an age old tag on their heads that women should assist in family works and that’s what they are ment for. Such societies never cease the conservative tag of exploiting women by compelling them to work in family domain and their betrayal offers them an option either to leave home or lay off the job. Under the circumstances, they will be left with no alternative but to oblige the matter to the patron who works for the welfare of the man-kind, Social activists and the like.
No woman loves to live an oppressed life where they can hardly move as they wish. Also, they are neglected, thrashed or quelled for their rigid commitment to work. Societies with such paradox always hinders women from contributing in the outside jobs besides family works. However, some steps taken by International Organizations like UN happen to be a crisp. As of now, United Nations is contributing to the welfare of women. Many international commitments also support women social and economic upliftment. We discover such programmes laid by UN as Training, divulging skills through trials, educational enrollment or meeting out parents to convince dwelling on the importance of education for both son as well as daughter. It is strictly needed where democracy values, social rights should matter above all, and the conviction must provoke within almost all dwellers. Great Novelists have, rumors has it, dedicated their effort to make women access to all the rights that they are actually born for. Similarly, Social activists’ do not leave any loopholes to such quaint societies by blazing away with verbs at anytime and anywhere.
To sum up, Women’s suppression is a way a generational issue for the most part. Situation of either leave or stay panic most women and rouse a feeling of a dreadful situation of being isolated or simultaneously a feeling that they would be abased if they do not lay off, put them to problem. So, it is better if women rather threshold their step by the dint of their courage than take an exaggerated steps from social activists, writers or any international agencies that owe no less formalities than steps against the issue.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n-kind, Social activists and the like. No woman loves to live an oppressed life...
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...he importance of education for both son as well as daughter. It is strictly needed where d...
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... their courage than take an exaggerated steps from social activists, writers or any i...
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... any international agencies that owe no less formalities than steps against the issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, similarly, so, well, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12026726058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87035663767 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561247216036 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6098221669 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4090909091 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253003809555 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829503179325 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765326173765 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163621012714 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458910339746 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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