Write about the following topic.
Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs.
How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Food choice has always been our greatest concern as only when our body is provided with sufficient nutrients can it functions properly. Nevertheless, in fact, there still remain a vast majority of people who take food prices more seriously than how it is processed. From my point of view, this could be due to their low income and I believe that other factors are of more significance.
There are certain reasons why a large number of people regard prices as their top priority when it comes to what they buy. However, the most important one could be attributed to their tight budget. In other words, those who have financial problems tend to consider very carefully before choosing what they bring home. This is simply because apart from an amount being spent on food, they have to expend on other increasingly high living costs such as renting, bills, children’s education, and other necessities, not to mention health-care fees when they suffer from illness. That is to say unless they spend in a reasonable way, it is highly likely that they are trapped in debt.
On the other hand, others would be inclined to argue that food’s content, convenience, and origin are more important. To begin with, health-conscious people hold a belief that no matter how much food they consume on a daily basis or how much it costs, it is important that their health is secured. This can be made by eating a balanced diet and staying away from high-fat foods such as pizza or burgers. Besides, the fast pace of life has also led people who have hectic schedules to opt for convenient food which helps save their time. For instance, instead of spending a considerable amount of time preparing their breakfast, office workers would rather pick up takeaways on the way they commute to work. On top of this, a vast majority of parents choose food for their children based on where it is produced and packaged as they regard goods which are imported from developed countries as having higher quality than domestic ones. In actual fact, Vietnamese mums prefer Japanese and German milk to that of any other countries despite the fact that they apply exactly the same technology.
To conclude, people’s attitude toward food differs depending on their budget and demand. However, I suggest that it is necessary that people take their health into more consideration before deciding what to eat to maintain a healthy body.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...icance. There are certain reasons why a large number of people regard prices as their top prior...
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Line 2, column 609, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lness. That is to say unless they spend in a reasonable way, it is highly likely that they are trap...
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Line 3, column 938, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'fact'.
Suggestion: fact
...g higher quality than domestic ones. In actual fact, Vietnamese mums prefer Japanese and Ge...
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Line 3, column 1092, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they apply exactly the same technology. To conclude, people’s attitude toward fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, apart from, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88753056235 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54897685647 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59413202934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5370110697 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.588235294 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76470588235 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326204990857 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993498730992 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550841944267 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189063037414 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479780162724 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.