You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should write at least 250 words.
Sport have become very important activity in the world.There are numbers sport played acorss the world.Every person in world have some affection to any type of sports.The sport can be either indoor or outdoor depending upon choice of interest.Some people may have interest in football or some people people may have interest in cricket.
Different people have different views about each sport depending upon there experience in past.Some people might think physical strength play's major role in any sport.The Virat Kohli,an Indian cricketer feel's physical strength as success in life.As early stage of his life,he found many problems has occured during game. After having some years of experience, he found out his physical fitness as major throwback to his career.The working on his physcial strengthand ability made him an Indian cricket team captain in few years.So supporter's of cricket across world consider physical strength as important factor.The sport which includes running,weight lifting or fighting will always require physical strength at high scale.
There are many other sport in the world which do require some amount of physical strength but demand's high amount of mental strength too.Such as boxing, kabaddi or martial arts.The patience and mental strength play's important role in this sport.Even this sports require physical strength but concentration and patience is required at high scale.The Marry kom,an Indian female boxer who was not successful in her career at early stage.Being three child mother,she required great amount of mental strength and decision power to upcome in her career.Such mental strength and patience changed her life and became India female boxing champion.So people who have affection towards boxing and made her as role model in there life will following her steps.
Different people have different views or opinion regarding sports based on there experience.The sport is play very important role in everyone life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5298013245 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59741988555 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.595546509 49.4020404114 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 334.0 106.682146367 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.4 20.7667163134 291% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257886497865 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153342290783 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370199161237 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162586206938 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346356619197 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.