Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio . Is this positive or a negative trend. provide reasons and examples for your opinion?
Music plays an indispensable role in human being life. Mostly teenagers prefer hearing to music as compared to the news on a radio. In my opinion, people can relieve their stress level to listen to music and it is a largely positive trend but it has also some negative impact on them.
It is certainly true that people can do whole things with the help of music. The main advantage is that as people listen to several kinds of music such as pop, jazz, folk, and even traditional music, this may help to get insight into distinctive cultures and languages instead of radio because of radio is less popular among young people these days. For instance, even if people commute to certain places, then they can easily spend their leisure time to listen to different music and people feel comfortable and relaxed.
It has also a negative impact on youngsters life. In music, they can only listen to pop and jazz which are not essential for them, but on radio, there is innumerable news related to crimes, sports, and education which they could aware of whole things in their life. As a result, the majority of people would not know about what is happening around them, if a radio has not listened by humanity.
The main reason to listen to music is that today people have a hectic schedule to do such work, thus they listen to music owing to which individuals want to relieve their stress level. In my perspective, both radio and music are joint endeavors due to both are equally important for the development of every person.
To conclude, although it is a decent way to listen to different types of music because of young people can get a chance to enhance their knowledge of several things, yet also they should be concerned about demerits of music.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67096774194 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37245071024 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.9457818386 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370034944192 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138700547256 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642179343786 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215214658203 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536111695939 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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