Doyouagreethattheadvantagescarsbringoutweighthedisadvantages?

Essay topics: Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent times, car using has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern. While this cars is detrimental to some extent. I am of the fervent conviction that the benefits are more significant.
On the negative side, car emissions have a serious impact on air. Carbon dioxide stemming from the automobile makes a great contribution to cause greenhouse effect, which rises global temperatures. To take a concrete example, car emissions is a main reason of air pollution in Beijing, China. Moreover, cars not only cause greenhouse effect but also create traffic jams. Nowadays, it is obvious that the number of people using care increases significantly, which has a serious impact on traffic jams especially in urban areas. As a result, a percentage of people assume that cars bring many drawbacks.
Although the pitfalls seem compelling. I am fierce in the assertion that the benefits far outweigh the drawbacks. Firstly, cars have given people freedom of movement. The ease of transportation which a car brings is more than any means of public transportation. For instance, you can go from one place to another without any waiting time for the bus or train. Therefore, time and distance are no longer a barrier. Secondly, automobiles enhance quality of terms of service contributing to boost economic development. Indeed, cars play a vital role in transporting people and goods in the service industry such as a restaurant service, tourism or entertainment.
In conclusion, while acknowledging air pollution and traffic congestion, the benefits that could be gained surpass the shortcomings.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...limelight and has aroused wide concern. While this cars is detrimental to some extent...
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Line 2, column 602, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... assume that cars bring many drawbacks. Although the pitfalls seem compelling. I am fier...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.265625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07709373588 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62890625 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.171272712 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8888888889 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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