In modern world, entertainers are minting ample money but do these people deserve it as there are a slew of other professions which should receive more. Is this trend positive for a common man and the society at large? Many may advocate this notion however, I strongly disagree with it and will provide evidences to justify my view point further in this essay.
To embark upon, defence forces are definitely more merited to get high salary. It is no exaggeration to state that this particular elite endanger their life to protect our borders and our countryman. It is entirely because of their worthful sacrifices that we are enjoying our lives safely in our realms. I can reminisce of a very brave martyr Arjun Singh who had sacrificed his life for his country. I feel that the government should render huge amount to his family.
Additionally, other noble jobs such as Medicine, Teaching and Farming should be paid more in contrast to these celebrities. These are the people who play an important role in the growth of a society, without them it would be quite difficult to sustain. For example, teachers are crucial to build a robust foundation of children and hence of this society. But it is very deplorable that they get less salary and therefore nowadays, they do not perform their duty diligently which is perilous for the future of young generation.
To recapitulate, I would like to mention assertively that the drawbacks of allowing one special class to earn plenty of money and depriving other classes from the similar privileges far outweigh any positive repercussions. It is simply because in future nobody would aim to become a doctor or a teacher rather all will aspire to be an entertainer which will be fatal for the upliftment of any nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'slews'?
Suggestion: slews
... these people deserve it as there are a slew of other professions which should recei...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
... a common man and the society at large? Many may advocate this notion however, I strongl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88704318937 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69757213036 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3749669176 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155519789833 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476909103529 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573326995732 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862317669093 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359393941983 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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