It is a known fact that people thesedays do not pay much attention to physical workouts. A part of society believes that broadcasting sport events on digital media would encourage adults to exercise more and live a healthy life. However, believe that other methods like dietary modifications can be employed to improve the health of inhabitants.
To begin with, sports can play a marvellous effect on the health of a person.By showing sport programmes and olympics a message can be conveyed to the viewers regarding the importance of exercise in leading a healthy life.
Players exercise regularly to remain fit and free of diseases. By frequent workouts one burns excessive calories and hence, decreases the incidence of contracting certain ailments like Heart Attack and Blood Pressure. A study which was conducted in London demonstrated that people who led sedentary life style were more involved in diseases. Therefore, the essence of exercise can be understood
Although physical workouts is one of the way to remain healthy, certain other ways also exist.
By altering the eating habits, one can remain fit.
Though fast food is delicious, it is full of fats. Therefore, it increases the probability of catching a disease. So, it is one's favour to avoid junk food. An article published in a famous newspaper read that unhealty eating habits decreases the likelihood of preventing health disorders.
In conclusion, it is certain that no doubt exercise is an effective way to promote health, altering food intake is also essential.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...ellous effect on the health of a person.By showing sport programmes and olympics a...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...bility of catching a disease. So, it is ones favour to avoid junk food. An article p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24193548387 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83759829784 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604838709677 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0224949398 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8571428571 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231356777942 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062885305315 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681655199059 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101392574935 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699751757637 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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