It is irrefutably true that transportation of goods and fruits by air from one to one another country is becoming more and more popular in the era of globalization, Therefore, some individual of the society admit that its merits out`match demerits and my views are in synchronization with of thought.
At the outset, first and foremost benefit is that if eatable things are transport in global village, it will open up new avenues of employment because inhabitants are being got jobs in this field due to this many farmers can get a chance to sell their products in international market in order to get more income which would bring progress by leaps and bounds of the country. Moreover, good relation can be mitigated the obstacle of armed conflicts and enhance global peace, harmony, integrity, stability, and fraternity because it is playing a instrumental role in consolidating the relations with others countries which would helpful for world development.
On the flip side, opponents opine that exotic food takes a heavy toll on the indigenous culture, because imported food are being become more popular in the country which decline the income home retailers,For example, fast food which was imported from western nations has become more prferred than home nation food. Last but not least, preservatives may be used in order to protect them while transporting one to another nation, can give detrimental effects to the human health when they consumed in more quantity and enhance the health issues.
To encapsulate, given aforementioned information ,it is abundantly clear that despite of having some drawbacks of air transportation, it benefits cannot be overlooked. it seems to me that it would be good to invest in and develop even more the airfreight of food for vital daily resident’s demand, I would argue that there is no justifications for method of exporting fruit and vegetables with air. Even though many benefits can be taken from this method especially for local farmers in poor countries, saving earth from further environmental damages is more essential. Therefore, for overcoming this problem United Nations should release international trade regulation so that it can control and protect over using air transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29444444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99968619758 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4310511033 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 211.777777778 106.682146367 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247031472072 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104339390354 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481018970686 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141868766825 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701159151978 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.5 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.