Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debatable issue whether making more money at work is more important than job satisfaction or enjoying and having a good feeling of the job that we are doing in everyday life. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor. First of all, being paid fairly and even more than conventional wages, might help people make their lives easier or at high standards of living. Because of this, many people tend to get paid more even they don’t enjoy what they are doing. The second point is, having a high wage career, in many cases may lead to receiving better social services and respect. As a consequence, a big salary may be a good choice to pick compare to job satisfaction or other factors in many cases.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, the first point of this issue is that doing what you love will lead you to success and keep you motivated, even with less payment. For instance, I know some engineers who have been doing their jobs for more than 20 years and they haven’t had any discouraging or disappointing time throughout their careers, even that they are not getting paid too much. And This is all because they enjoy what they do. Apart from this, being satisfied will work as an inspiring method, which helps people to fulfill more tasks. As a
the result, productivity will rise if people are satisfied with their jobs.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, job satisfaction is much more important than a high salary, simply because it can help people feel happier and more productive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73899371069 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47719913714 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1273819978 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27091413196 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839489609419 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957089417359 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14852155684 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896517299692 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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