Welcome to age old debate about Big salary versus job satisfaction. Unfortunately, we are in world where happiness and money are termed and read relatively. From childhood, parents try to guide their kids to decide their career choices in relation to the money earned. However, I am completely against this culture and in this essay, we will discuss some relevant examples and need to change this thought process.
Conglomerate companies’ promise’s us many incentives but happiness comes from inner satisfaction. Psychologist suggests that a sense of insecurity comes from work which we feel mundane and it leads to fear of losing job. Whereas, a passionate work environment keeps us motivated irrespective of financial problems. Curiosity is added benefit of self-employment and a sense of dignity lies in professional paths. Expert in para medical fields now coined a term called as ‘Monday Syndrome’ describing a disorder to be lazy and chest numbness for those who has work pressure and body shows psychosomatic results as side effects. This is typical example of hardships gone by a stereotype employee attending office from 9.30 to 6.30 every day. Neither bonus nor increments can save them when they are in dire need of therapist help.
On the other hand, we have entrepreneurs, famous actors, talented musicians who followed their dream and inspired million others to live a life worth of living. With little perseverance and determination one can land on a job that brings both economic independence and joy in their work. However, one should be aware of leaps and bounds before embarking on their journey towards prospectus future. Sacrifice and to be content with what they have earned is key to continuing the way. For instance, we have Mahendra Singh Dhoni who broke traditional view of success and opened doors to glory for those trying to bring a change in society. His story is guide book for children seeking professional sports as career path. Many Engineers from prestigious institutions opt for civil services while denying foreign opportunities which can bag them multi-national opportunities.
In summary, we can conclude the topic by saying that job satisfaction is most important and without it our life becomes mechanical. Big salaries do not necessarily define our personalities and who we are. Our character is moulded by enthusiasm that we welcome in but not by bank balance we possess. It’s time for us to break this monotonous 5 days’ work life and instead find a career where we don’t look for a weekend to smile.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ane and it leads to fear of losing job. Whereas, a passionate work environment keeps us...
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Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...s who followed their dream and inspired million others to live a life worth of living. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2154.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17788461538 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.990910169 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637019230769 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5696087805 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9090909091 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805675504093 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243187084408 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043811272912 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538923432734 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370581994596 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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