Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Since the formation of labor relationships people have been aspiring after the balance between the amount of wage and pleasure obtained from work. Proceeding from this, an opinion exists that the benefits from the money received is more significant than from a favorite activity. I completely disagree to the above -mentioned point of view due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
First of all, I am convinced that the proper atmosphere at one’s work can contribute to the prosperity of health, that no money provides. Therefore, the choice of the future profession is crucial and it should be made at the beginning of a working career. Apart from that many people alter their lives and types of activity depending on the gratification received from the work performed. For example, my friend Anna was tired and nervous from a high-paying job and changed It for painting pictures she had always loved and began to feel much better. Hence, a relaxing background at a certain establishment helps individuals avoid unpredictable physical and mental issues.
Moreover , healthy relations at the office will inevitably lead to employees’ high performance which, in its turn, will result in the promotion. In my opinion, if a person is devoted to their tasks, the outcome will be considered to be awesome. Managers always see the quality of the work processed and positively evaluate such subordinates. For instance, the biography of Larry King depicts, what peaks a favorite job allows to achieve. Thus, the professionalism of an employee grows with the accumulation of experience and fosters an increase in the level of their income.
To conclude, I do support the view that nothing can prevail over the excellent feeling of human tranquility. I also believe, that stressless job will definitely be a trigger to become wealthy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mance which, in its turn, will result in the promotion. In my opinion, if a perso...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'achieving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: achieving
...picts, what peaks a favorite job allows to achieve. Thus, the professionalism of an employ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18581081081 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97354248373 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638513513514 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5585657543 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600324676743 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0178966653296 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223986579156 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380652296798 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181832847227 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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