Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?
Studying is a compulsory issue for every person these days, either poor or rich. These two types of people find the accessibility into university is hard and demand a lot of money and needs. So, some agree that university acceptance is hard, others think the opposite and disagree.
Universities are growing, new difficult and expensive majors are appearing, that’s why people believe entering university is difficult. First, high level Uni’s are expensive, most of them are private, each applicant must meet their requirements such as, high grades and be genius. Second, the economic situation lately is affecting on all type of people and prefer to access public university, to pay less even if it requires several documents and a certain level of scores. For example, Lebanese Public Universities, it’s hard for any student to be accepted, if entrance exams aren’t done and they receive high scores, to be granted. From my side I agree, economically paying big amount of money these days it’s hard, and university requirements changed recently.
On the other hand, several people think that anyone can access any university he wants, and it isn’t difficult. First, some think that private colleges can accept anyone, even if he/she aren’t qualified, they can get intensive courses, by only paying money and this leads to corruption. Second, scholarship can play a big role for everyone, where both rich and poor people can enter any university, by showing high scores. For example, in Lebanon, high level universities offer scholarships for many students’ addition to monthly salaries and accommodation, but there are several conditions should be done firstly. From my point of view, I disagree, where universities must be free for local citizens and the government should support public and private academies to accept everyone.
As a conclusion, studying is mandatory for all people rich or poor and they should not worry to access any university. In my opinion, I agree that university must be free for poor, and reach people must pay reasonable fees, where all can study, and their country can benefit from them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33139534884 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85698733328 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55523255814 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5566202051 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.266666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186577357016 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759495707079 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597575579414 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13953934076 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595295525702 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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