In the contemporary era, more and more children are becoming obese, and it could have detrimental effects on them when they become older. In this essay I will look at some reasons for this trend and suggest some solutions.
Obesity among children is sprawling issue, and I believe the main factor is consumption of junk foods which is full of fat. Having an unhealthy diet will ameliorate the risk of many diseases such as cancer, heart attack and diabetes. Another issue is that juveniles tend to have a sedentary lifestyle. Lack of exercise leads to accumulation of harmful substances such as saturated fats in their bodies, so again they are in perilous of diseases were mentioned above. Furthermore, obesity can have ramification impacts on social contacts of our child and causes a feeling of embarrassment for them. Also, being overweight could affect their adulthood. Posture problems, sleep disorders, breathing problems, high cholesterol and many other troubles are chasing them if we do not take it seriously.
However, there are plethora of steps that schools, governments and parents could take to tackle it. Primarily, parents should prepare wholesome meals which are delicious and look appealing to them. One way for it is that instead of fried food, they can use other methods of cooking like steaming or boiling. Secondly, governments should limit junk foods advertising or school authorities could ban selling unhealthy food at school. Another option is that food companies be forced to put nutrition label on their product and this could act as a deterrent when consumer see this kind of information. In addition to this, another option would be to encourage children to take regular exercise, for example, parents could set specific time for doing physical activity with family which is full of enjoyments for kids.
In conclusion, although obesity is a major problem among youngster, we could address it by changing their lifestyle and the help of authorities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18691588785 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75227253821 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619937694704 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0318379659 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142988170147 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411132465104 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549931461502 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101717570705 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670929167174 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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