Crime is the most inextricable matter to be dealt with at present as it is rising incessantly in the entire world and there are several factors attributable to it. Although, there are many people who blame violent games for it because they think, it is making children fierce. However, I disagree with this notion for the following reasons.
To embark upon, poverty is a major issue which is responsible for it to a great extent. Though, it is more prevalent in the under developed or undeveloped nations but even highly developed realms are also suffering from it to a certain limit. Poor youth has aspiration to live a luxurious life style like wealthy people and in order to fulfill their needs and greed, they get indulged in the illegal activities. This section of the society is deprived and thus can be brain washed easily as they find it to be a feasible solution to all their problems.
Moreover, corruption is the second biggest cause as inspite of being qualified, young generation is not able to get deserving job and salary. This leads to vehement frustration and anger, compelling them to get drawn towards the crime world.
To recapitulate, it is a perilous situation, we should not simply blame the trend of wild games for it and free ourselves from our duties towards the society. Indeed, we must try to resolve these problems and encourage our children to play outdoor games which will keep them fit and healthy. Also, we must tell them to participate more in smart games like chess that will make them intelligent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82264150943 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60902942334 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1259457275 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197518534261 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658800892456 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465342841686 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11084143447 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049236044897 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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