Children usually want to play the same games and watch the same tv programs as their friends. Should Parents allow it or not? Give your opinion and examples from your experience.
To understand the child psychology always remains a subject of contestation among the parents. It has been observed that children are used to copying their friends regarding playing games or watching any TV programs. I certainly believe that parents should guide children for not copying their children in everything they observe.
Usually, Childhood is a susceptible age when kids used to follow activities enjoyed by their friends around them. For instance, In India, almost every kid like to play cricket from their childhood influencing by their friend's hobby. Moreover, at such fragile age, they do not gauge any physical or psychological difference between self and his friends. For example, some sports and programs are not suitable for their fitness and mental status, but in failing to attempt it may cause physical and psychological harm to them. At last, kids are always possessive and obstinate in their tender age. They like to acquire a hold on all the activities performed by another fellow to display his capabilities in performing the same action in a better way.
On the other hand, it is believed that children can learn in a better way from their friends. The activities done by
friend motivate them to be competitive and adaptive. For instance, there was a very popular program called "Shaktiman" watched and discussed by Indian children that help them to understand new life skill every day. Furthermore, doing the everyday activity together develops more confidence and bonding among children. It generates memories to cherish for a lifetime.
To conclude, childhood is the age when vulnerable should allow to do experiments with friends and grow from its learning. However, guidelines and intervene of elder are equally crucial to avoid any crisis.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30877192982 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91084301863 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1166852772 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196378686276 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590504119054 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573627988369 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109241380352 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497383058358 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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