Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Modern era is the era of technology and tremendous development. Every fiber of the universe is proceeding towards its ultimate. However, these progressive steps are alarming towards the threats in context of the ecology, population, and literacy; peeping around the corner. This essay is going to delve for the issues borne and would propose some suggestive measures on individual, social, and political level.
To embark with the individuals, the biggest concern is the population explosion. Over the period of time this increase in the number of nature’s consumers has posed some serious issues. As the population is growing the natural resources; which are obviously limited; are being degraded. To be specific, land is getting used because it is very natural that more people could be accommodated on more land. However, skyscrapers and underground buildings may solve this problem.
Shifting the focus towards the environment, society would be the one to suffer the most. Climate change, for instance, is the outcome of all the heinous deeds which humans have commit against the nature. Is the only major issues raised as a result of deterioration of environment? Certainly not. Another dreadful thing is decline in the quality of oxygen. But, Air qualifier towers have been in installed by the authorities of many nations to make sure that its people would stay healthy.
In essence, this regular increase in technology has presented some serious issues peeping around the corner in the form of habitat deformation, increase in population along with education. While by taking some suggestive measures this fast pace growth can be stopped from being counterproductive.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...n is the population explosion. Over the period of time this increase in the number of nature&a...
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Line 9, column 178, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'committed'.
Suggestion: committed
...all the heinous deeds which humans have commit against the nature. Is the only major i...
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Line 13, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ase in population along with education. While by taking some suggestive measures this...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44318181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90391496216 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4162420635 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120426586911 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033216501408 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368705885065 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673933890156 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034249839451 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.