Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
New lifestyles and modern technologies require more energy than ever before. The immediate consequence of this is more fossil fuel sources have to be discovered which means discoveries in areas where have not been touched before. Although it provides more sources of energy, its harm to the environment is greater and may cause the extinction of many living creatures.
Fossil fuels are the main source of energy in our world. Modern technologies such as computers and robots are fed with energy. The World Bank has predicted that the increment in need for energy by 40% in the next few years. Therefore finding new sources for fossil fuels is essential to be able to cope with this increment. As a consequence more areas have to be covered in search operations for fuels especially where no discovery has been done before.
For many, new discoveries on virgin areas means a tremendous thread for the environment. Digging a new oil well will destroy the plants around it and also kills almost every animal around it. Most of the species in danger live in areas where no discovery has been done until now. Therefore, any activities there will be catastrophic and kill the surrounded environment.
In conclusion, although the need for more energy requires to search in new areas for new fossil fuel sources, the damage that it causes to the environment is enormous and has to be avoided. Therefore, it is recommended to harvest more energy from wind and sun which are sustainable and environment-friendly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...or energy by 40% in the next few years. Therefore finding new sources for fossil fuels is...
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Line 9, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
... For many, new discoveries on virgin areas means a tremendous thread for the envir...
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Line 13, column 59, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'searching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: searching
...hough the need for more energy requires to search in new areas for new fossil fuel source...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05158730159 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88848276842 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4200493306 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9285714286 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170074697557 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630341819199 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572545392541 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110310724392 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183621664266 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.