With the development of social media, more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the internet in order to meet and chat with friends which can lead to potentially dangerous situations. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?
Social media storm is still going strong and it can only get stronger in future. This essay will discuss the main causes for this problem which are lack of age limit to use it, and insufficient knowledge about how to use it effectively. This essay will also suggest solutions to this problem such as having an age limit to use social media, educating younger ones on how to use social media, and creating a secured environment for its use.
The usage of social media depends of the individual’s mental strength. Mental strength can only be attained after a certain age and this has become a major issue with younger lot. Secondly, the kids, especially the teenagers, they don’t have enough knowledge about it. This is another problem to deal with. When a youngster who is still not completely aware of the downsides of the social media, this is when he falls prey to it, because he is exposed to certain elements in social media like life-threatening games or for that matter adulterated content whose usability is beyond his age limit and mental capabilities of his mind. For example, a recent online game, ‘Momos’ was targeted at children between age group of 11-17 years. As per ‘International Child Care Council,’ this game has accounted for significant number of deaths among the mentioned age group. Hence, due to all these reasons, the risk of using social media is higher in children.
As the saying goes, ‘Every problem has in it the seeds of its own solution,’ there are solutions for the above discussed problems as well. The organizations who run these social media platforms need to create a strict age restriction rule based upon their content. Further, there needs to be more social media awareness camps in schools to make children realize the side effects of social media. Moreover, it is the responsibility of parents to create a secured and healthy environment at home to prevent generation of any negative thoughts in a child’s mind. For instance, in a recent news article about a couple who traced out the browsing history of their child, it helped them to protect the child from falling in trap for the suicidal online game. Therefore, to protect the children from falling in trap to the bad side of social media, the above suggested are the few key solutions.
To conclude, if social media is used properly, then it can be a very solid tool for knowing the unknown. However, there are enough downsides to this as well. This essay discussed the problems of social media among youngsters and it also suggested solutions to these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 439.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9589977221 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85793760402 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51708428246 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0097533186 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.85 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.95 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158427657079 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598269706216 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555586653421 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109818954559 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255421571158 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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