Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels.
Differences between nations are becoming less perceptible these days as people all over the world are sharing the same lifestyle, costumes, food, advertisement, and entertainment programs. The following essay discusses the benefits and the drawbacks of this global trend and would reach to a logical conclusion whether advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Due to the globalisation, people share the same fashion styles, commercials, brands and television programs these days and this trend offers some benefits. Firstly, as international brands such as Colgate or Gillette produce products in mass scale, the manufacturing cost of these worldwide products become cheaper. As a result, consumers enjoy the advantage of buying global branded products at an affordable rate. Secondly, as people all over the world share the same culinary experience, it means that people have more diet options nowadays. People who live in big cities such as New York or London would have the option to purchase food based on their appetite, whether it is Chinese, Indian or Western food. Furthermore, this trend would reduce the cultural barrier different nations have and would bring people under a common platform where citizens in a country will have more knowledge and respect about other nations and their customs.
On the other hand, many believe that the globalisation of the fashion, entertainment and culinary industries have some negative points. One of the cases is that many people abandon their cultural values these days, as they prefer to follow the world trend. The globalisation also has a negative effect on the identity of a country. Lastly, the foreign television shows have negative influences to the young people, such as violence and unsuitable contents. Many global TV channels are showing programmes which might be prohibited in some cultures. However, as these shows are easily seen nowadays, many young people in those countries are following the style and as a consequence, many of them are adopting a non-acceptable lifestyle.
In conclusion, it is true that the globalisation of the fashion, advertising, culinary and entertainment products have their own advantages and disadvantages, but I personally feel that it has more negative points than the positive aspects. I personally believe that we should be selective and be really careful in selecting those global brands and lifestyles.
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also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4691689008 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97149401515 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538873994638 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6377978626 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180585049113 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059600678123 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909962499097 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112900365974 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785729133209 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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