Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while other thinks this is role of parents.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
These days child’s behavior in school has become a serious issue, which has erupted a debate who to will play a lead role in order to groom a discipline child teacher or the parents. I believe both teachers and parents play an important role in the up bring of a child who one day will become an educated, sophisticated and responsible citizen of this society.
People who believe that teachers should take the responsibility in the positive upbringing of a child is because teachers are the people who are trained to handle children with different behaviors and it has been also observed from physiological point of view that children tends to listen more from their teachers than parents. It has also been observed that children often imitate the style of their teacher when they are home, which gives a solid reason to believe that teach should take the lead role in disciplining the child.
However people who believe that parents should take the responsibility to discipline there child is because a child spends most of the time of a day with his parents and even before joining the school time spend was with his parents. It is a well establish fact that couple who are living happily have a home environment very happy and energetic and their children are more discipline compared to children who come from parents who are not experiencing a good relationship.
Therefore I believe that both teachers and parents should play a pivotal role in the upbringing of a discipline child in order to become a good and responsible citizen of this society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a one'.
Suggestion: who is a one
...portant role in the up bring of a child who one day will become an educated, sophistica...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bserved from physiological point of view that children tends to listen more from ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... lead role in disciplining the child. However people who believe that parents should ...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... not experiencing a good relationship. Therefore I believe that both teachers and parent...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86142322097 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71865226741 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445692883895 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2105016169 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.428571429 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1428571429 20.7667163134 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160200876433 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096032922032 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408655837735 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121381319707 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325678179227 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.