With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the reasons and suggest solutions to sort it.With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the reasons and suggestion solutions to sort it.
In recent decades, the graph of divorce rate and family breakdown has drastically increased around the world and most people agree that families no more share the same feelings as earlier they use to. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and also suggest some solutions to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the most overwhelming reason behind this situation is the lack of communication. Earlier people used to talk to each other in their free time and most of the families had mealtime together as it was usually known as the quality time with the families. However, now life has become fast and busy and people tend to spend their time at work in order to give their family luxurious life at the cost of the emotions and time which is necessary to maintain the family. This situation has worsened after the invention of the internet and mobile phones as people like to interact or place online in their leisure time in spite of their family. For instance, a survey done by “The Time” reveals that China is the highest figure for the divorce because people prioritize their work and personal life over the family.
However, there can be some solutions which can be followed to sort this problem such as parents should inculcate the moral value in children and teach them the importance of the family and relations. Apart from this, the government should regulate the timings of all offices so that people can spend time with their families and friends. For instance, most of the billionaires on the death bed agreed that they missed the family time which they missed while rushing after money. Furthermore, the local communities and organizations should arrange games and events in which families can participate which will definitely act a chance to enhance family relationships and strengthening their bonds.
To conclude, modern lifestyle and lack of communication paves a way to a breakdown of family and relationship ending up in divorce. However, moral values given by parents and participation of the whole family in games and events can help in lowering down of this even increasing breakdown rate.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95798319328 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58700117303 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4524604671 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.153846154 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278388431605 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104549706316 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746065362735 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198226726448 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857987310836 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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