Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus
What do u think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Studying online has become most popular means of learning. As the year goes by, more students prefer studying online than going for classes on campus. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and possible ways of solving this issue.
First and foremost, studying online tends to be more convenient for most students because of the cost that they may be incurred in travelling to school, especially when students live very far from school, as well as traffic congestion that may be encountered when coming into the campus. This factors could make studying online more preferably.
Secondly, the effectiveness of studying online could be another reason why it will be more acceptable, especially when modern technology are being introduced, whereby a student can easily go online to get an update on particular topic that may not be well explanatory while in class. However, making use of this method makes online studying more preferable.
Considering the rate at which students prefer studying online, the following solutions may be put in place, firstly, availability of mordern studying materials and technology, secondly, making university environment more conducive for learning, thirdly, organising special programs on campus which students will find very interesting. Putting all these in place will definitely make students find attending classes more useful than studying online.
In conclusion, this essay has discussed to a large extent the causes of studying online overiding attending classes, as well as possible solutions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.525 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75498285939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.471886615 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.6 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320849052428 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160476967857 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676519391394 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195559446965 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402278642023 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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